A lone stranger called Kerrender arrives on the planet Cervantes (presumably a nod to the famous Spanish author), He is a highly trained fighter, 7ft 5ins tall and needs fuel for his ship to help repel an attack by the Rengols, an enemy force who have decimated his home planet of Rawn. After a saloon brawl leaves ten of the locals dead. Kerrender is challenged to a duel with flame-whips, while the Rengol fleet is getting ever closer.
There is a mish-mash of themes here, none of which really work (although the Spaghetti Western saloon scene is quite fun), The pretentious repetition of the line 'On Rawn died the Thirty Thousand...' is just irritating and while the ideas are decent enough for a student rag mag, they are exposed in this short story. Looking on the isfdb site, author John Keith didn't do anything else, which is a shame as there is promise in the raw talent, and the writing itself is reasonable.Overall:- 4/10
Planet:- Cervantes